No Otaku with Harem System

Chapter 34: Rethinking

chapter 34: rethinking

rereading the novel and looking at the comments i realize that i have made many mistakes, be it contradictions in the mc's attitude, plot holes, lack of interactions between characters, lack of dialogue, or excessive internal monologues. they make it look like i'm not really doing a good job.

i do not like to do poor quality work and i feel disappointed in myself for not being able to develop a good story, seeing the serious narrative and development problems that i am committing, i am concerned that the novel is causing more frustration than joy to you readers.

i've tried to fix those problems in the last few chapters, but the established narrative and character construction makes it difficult for me to make unjustified changes so i don't know if i should continue. ̃øv€lß1n.

i have two options:

i would appreciate your comments on what i should do about this novel, whether i should rewrite it from scratch or try to fix what i already have.

the last option is to leave this novel and write something simpler, when i have more experience writing and developing characters then i will return to this novel but in the end, i want to hear your opinion.

the spanish version of this novel is up to chapter 43 so i can finish translating the novel and you tell me what you think.

i also know that i make a lot of spelling mistakes since i use a program to translate since i don't know english, sorry.